December 12, 1977
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
Repetition (Repetition)
When words sloshed like water against the shore (How often I've written those words before) We could wade through the foam and find the core. (Remember a stanza has lines that are four) We could see through our problems again and again (Did I write that last line, it doesn't make sense) We could find quiet pleasure amidst the din. (Din -Din. Where the hell did I get that word?) A long time ago I had a dream. (Who's writing this thing. Am I having a dream.) And in that dream I drank some cream. (Why did he end the line with dream anyway?) The cream was you and I drank my fill (This is ridiculous. He calls this poetry?) Wait a second, who's that in the parentheses? (Uh, oh. I'd better find a rhyme and get in key.) Who is that, I asked? (Silence) Hmmm, won't answer huh? Now where was I. Oh, yeah. When words sloshed like water against the shore. (How often (see the first stanza) he's written those words before.) (Oh, good, I think I'll swim around in those words of his. God, this is repetitious.
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